Hi! Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. I'm going to be honest: this is the first time I've ever experienced someone recording a playthrough of my work on video and expressing their thoughts verbally and its a bit overwhelming and anxiety-inducing, so I don't think I'll be able to watch more than the few seconds of it that I did. I did read the video description and I can certainly understand why it can come across as unclear, in so far as the ending is kind of vague and open-ended(ish). Something I wish I could have done (but might be impossible or require more technical knowledge than I currently have) is have the final options of the game open up the external pages and also move the game forward to a final passage that would compliment either external link. Either way, the game has to stand and be evaluated for what it is rather than what it could have been. Thank you again for your time and your thoughts.
I found that this impacted me more than I initially thought it would. I also feel like I actually learned something after pouring over the WIPP page. It's a genuinely unnerving thought, and I think your writing reflects it well. Even with limited choices, I felt like there was a very real, and very forboding decision to be made. Great work!
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I gave this story a read through and shared some of my thoughts on it.
Hi! Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. I'm going to be honest: this is the first time I've ever experienced someone recording a playthrough of my work on video and expressing their thoughts verbally and its a bit overwhelming and anxiety-inducing, so I don't think I'll be able to watch more than the few seconds of it that I did. I did read the video description and I can certainly understand why it can come across as unclear, in so far as the ending is kind of vague and open-ended(ish). Something I wish I could have done (but might be impossible or require more technical knowledge than I currently have) is have the final options of the game open up the external pages and also move the game forward to a final passage that would compliment either external link. Either way, the game has to stand and be evaluated for what it is rather than what it could have been. Thank you again for your time and your thoughts.
Alright. You're free to do what you'd like and I'm certainly not looking to give you any kind of anxiety. Keep up the good work!
I found that this impacted me more than I initially thought it would. I also feel like I actually learned something after pouring over the WIPP page. It's a genuinely unnerving thought, and I think your writing reflects it well. Even with limited choices, I felt like there was a very real, and very forboding decision to be made. Great work!
Thank you so much!